More
Dude, give me more here, you got a nice start, and the ambient single string and then fade in with the synths and das NICE. So then you do the crazy drum shit that you do, and then... it ends. I'm sad man. You need more on there. So then here's my technical perspective. It's very distorted. Get that overdrive off of the main channel fucker. I taught you better than that. ;) If ANYTHING use the one buzz plugin and then use the omeck exciter to get some of your highs sounding better. But don't frick'n use the overdrive without trying to cut all the extra distortion below 3000hz. Fuck'n up the bass man ;) All the ambient sounds and the drums though, VERY nice.
oh and tell yer mom i'll be over for dinner eh? ;)